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If I Tell You That I Love You

If I tell you that I love you, Will you say it back to me? If I tell you that I love you, Will you run away and scream? If I tell you that I love you, Will you think it's a nightmare? If I tell you that I love you, Will you think it's just a dare? If I tell you that I love you, Would you kiss me in the rain? If I tell you that I love you, Would you become a greater pain? If I tell you that I love you, Would you stop and kiss my hair? If I tell you that I love you, Will our hearts become a pair? If I tell you that I love you, Would you love me with all of your soul? Or will it take me forever to realize that you let me fall down on my own?

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Date: 8/25/2011 7:30:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jackeline. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2011 10:33:00 AM
Absolutely powerful ending!
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Date: 8/24/2011 7:52:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading this very creative poetry today.. enjoy the site with its many features asu continue to share words with luv..
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