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If I sing songs

If I sing songs lined with honey Will you let me be your bunny? Let my hands make your heart flush Our loose lips lock and don't rush My love will make your eyes runny

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2024 8:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your winner in the Valentine limerick contest. Way to go. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2024 3:30:00 PM

Congrats on the win, Sabrina.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/4/2024 9:36:00 AM

LOL. Fun one Sabrina! Congratulations! :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/4/2024 8:39:00 AM

Sabrina, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute limerick!

Ink Empress

Date: 1/21/2024 3:43:00 AM

Lol i love it!!! “ my love will make your eyes runny” brilliant! One of the best limericks iv read for this. I love how you’ve written too the opening two lines! Lol! Ah not always do limericks make me laugh but this one surely did! So cheesy and cute! And just perfect! Best wishes for the contest!