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If I Say

If I say What if I told you i lost myself in you if i tell you that my eyes blink on you What if you think I need your law behind my love i die when you call me a gentleman And I replied you that I am not because my heart is crying to crush if I say i love you because of this pretty life With love all Jagdish Bajantri

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Naleli Nonyane

Date: 5/21/2023 9:35:00 AM

- I love how you explore the complexities of love and how you convey how it leaves you vulnerable, how you lose yourself in love, the desire for affection, and the internal struggle in dealing with the feeling of love - it evokes a sense of longing and an emotional depth that resonates with the reader.