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If I Just Talked To Clarisse...

apocalyptical surrender no one touching her withered leaves are falling her heart - a canopy mortal face of beauty smudged by evil rains search for inner shelter broken glass of puzzle pony tail of sorrow smile of timid child empty nest enduring reality of time Clarisse of Eastern Paris children mocking her waiting for her route She was never seen again... for Matt's Contest: Fictitious Person

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Date: 3/23/2010 5:27:00 AM
What a grand imagination you have, my poet friend. This sadly sounds too true. It is a believable write. Congratulations on your success in The Life Of A Fictitious Person contest sponsored by: Matt Caliri Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/22/2010 5:45:00 PM
So sad, nice write and Congrats
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Date: 3/22/2010 5:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem. Joyce
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Date: 3/22/2010 12:30:00 PM
A touching and melancholy poem for the contest! Very creative! Congratulations on this win, Iolanda!!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/1/2010 10:44:00 PM
What a sad one, but it's very nicely done, my dear and best of luck in this contest, which is sure to be really hard for judging! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/24/2010 11:27:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your Outstanding poetry today Iolanda. Please keep writing and sharing with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2010 7:32:00 AM
Well written my friend.... Excellent....:JP]
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Date: 2/24/2010 6:19:00 AM
Very disturbing poem. Intresting write, well writen. I enjoyed reading your poem this morning...irma
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