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If I have the time, just to be somewhere,
Somewhere that is so unique to splendor,
Where I can immerse in sweet surrender,
As nature seized words that are truly rare.
For I long to be lost in Paradise,
Where loving tunes to my inner spirit,
Romance surrounds when I am so near it,
This place for me, I will not compromise.
I will find love and I turn into us,
Mature to moonbeams and scoop up the stars,
Brought to a piece of Earth, that will be ours,
As wax to wick, then spark a flame, a plus.
A Hawaiian moon silence wooing hearts,
As eyes dilate its looming ascension,
Amidst loving arms in their extension,
Against backseat rest, as kissing imparts.
Original Date: 2019 December 28
Revised Date: 2019 December 29 *2nd Place*
If You Have the Time for an Enclosed Rhyme Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
Rhyme Scheme;
abba cddc effe ghhg
Howmanysyllables;
16 lines x 10 syllables per = 160 syllables total
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2019
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