Alexis Y. Poet Enclosed Rhyme

If I Had the Time, This Hour

If I have the time this hour,
I'd be cradled in your loving arms,
Safe from things that'll bring me harm,
Next I'd take a relaxing shower.

Then I'd get ready to start my day,
and get the kids up and ready for school.
I'd put on my uniform that's not very cool.
We all are dressed and on our merry way.

My job can be hectic and hard,
but it has rewards,in the form of a smile,
For the smile of a kid, I'd walk a long mile.
A kind "Thank You" is their trump card 

My work day has came to an end.
But I arrive home, my other job begins,
Because I'm greeted by the twins.
Then I wait for your arrival my best friend.








12/12/19
Contest:  If I have the Time For an Enclosed Rhyme
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Beata Agustin January 13, 2020 at 1:14 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this poetically... enjoying our tasks, especially with, along, and for our loved ones. God bless you.

Janice Canerdy January 12, 2020 at 9:07 PM Such a lovely poem, Alexis! CONGRATS on your big win. Janice

Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2020 at 2:15 PM Great job, Alexis. Big Congrats for a top placement.

Tania Kitchin January 12, 2020 at 5:32 AM Alexis, congratulations on your first place win in the contest. I enjoyed this, it was well written and flowed nicely and so true to life! Alexis Y. January 12, 2020 at 9:22 AM Hi Tania, You really made my day with this unexpected 1st place win. You hosted an amazing contest and you had some good entries. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Freddie Robinson Jr. December 13, 2019 at 4:09 PM Such beautiful sentiments expressed w/loving care, Alexis! Easily a winning entry. Pure poetry in quill motion. Love and more love always. Romantic Warrior

Jennifer Proxenos December 13, 2019 at 9:29 AM So loving, so beautiful, so you - a wonderful write, our best friend - this is a brilliant entry good luck Alexis. Love, Jenny.

Sandra Adams December 12, 2019 at 7:37 PM This is such a beautiful write...i love how you begin this one, your day sounds wonderful with the perfect ending... may all your days be as happy... best wishes in the contest... hugs and blessings!

Demetrios Trifiatis December 12, 2019 at 2:40 PM A day filled with loving activities and the culmination comes with the reward of love by the twins! Double happiness ! Excellent. Blessings . Hugs xxx

Gershon Wolf December 12, 2019 at 1:03 PM What a great attitude you have! Your twins and your husband are lucky, and so are your charges at school! Inspirational, Alexis! Thanks, Gershon

Vijay Pandit December 12, 2019 at 11:32 AM Loving verses of family joy--enjoyed the poem Alexis--wishing you the best.

Heidi Sands December 12, 2019 at 11:20 AM I enjoyed this poem Alexis. Very nice :)

Chris Green December 12, 2019 at 10:51 AM This was fun my friend and brought a smile to me this morning. You always seem to take or make time to make others happy and your poem does just that. Best wishes in the contest

Caren Krutsinger December 12, 2019 at 10:31 AM You have twins! Nothing better! Ask Connie and I because we ARE twins! Good luck in the contest. Nicely done. Alexis Y. December 12, 2019 at 10:35 AM Hi Caren, I don't have twins. I needed something to rhyme with begin.That part is fiction. I have a boy and a girl. They are close in age and they look alike. I appreciate you being the first to comment on my poem.