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If I Entrust

If I entrust my heart to you, You must handle it tenderly. It needs another heart that's true, Not one that will treat it casually But one that can love eternally.

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James Fraser

Date: 4/17/2011 11:37:00 AM

This is beautiful Francine, and words that are not a lot to ask for, entrust - I love it....:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/14/2011 11:33:00 AM

After a very super weekend I am back at the soup reading. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Francine. There are so many diverse writers here and I am so happy I am able to read most of them. Have a wonderful week and may you find what you are looking for in life and in your writing. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/13/2011 7:09:00 PM

followed your suggestion, francine.. hope its safe in your arms now .. yes? :) huggs

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/13/2011 6:11:00 PM

The words you have here remind me of the lyrics to a song recorded by the late Rosemary Clooney years ago. This is impressive.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/13/2011 5:52:00 PM

francine , my daer... i updated it already, the quantain.. could you let me know if you got it?? thanks with hugggs! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/13/2011 5:33:00 PM

Got that correct..Enjoyed..Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/13/2011 4:35:00 PM

And best of luck to you also ... Thank you for all your kind comments...always Michael

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/13/2011 4:34:00 PM

tenderness flows in this quantain, francine.. it's 7am here and i haven;t had sleep... so there, my piece is done! thanks and huggs! :) nette