If I Entrust

If I entrust my heart to you,

    You must handle it tenderly.

It needs another heart that's true,
 
    Not one that will treat it casually

But one that can love eternally.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/17/2011 11:37:00 AM
This is beautiful Francine, and words that are not a lot to ask for, entrust - I love it....:)
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Date: 3/14/2011 11:33:00 AM
After a very super weekend I am back at the soup reading. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Francine. There are so many diverse writers here and I am so happy I am able to read most of them. Have a wonderful week and may you find what you are looking for in life and in your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/13/2011 7:09:00 PM
followed your suggestion, francine.. hope its safe in your arms now .. yes? :) huggs
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Date: 3/13/2011 6:11:00 PM
The words you have here remind me of the lyrics to a song recorded by the late Rosemary Clooney years ago. This is impressive.
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Date: 3/13/2011 5:52:00 PM
francine , my daer... i updated it already, the quantain.. could you let me know if you got it?? thanks with hugggs! :)
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Date: 3/13/2011 5:33:00 PM
Got that correct..Enjoyed..Sara
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Date: 3/13/2011 4:35:00 PM
And best of luck to you also ... Thank you for all your kind comments...always Michael
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Date: 3/13/2011 4:34:00 PM
tenderness flows in this quantain, francine.. it's 7am here and i haven;t had sleep... so there, my piece is done! thanks and huggs! :) nette
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