if i could hold somebody's hand
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3/5/2025 for March 2025 Posted Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand
the best laid plans
so they say
sometimes
they might go the wrong way
things didn't go as they were planned
somebody
hold my hand
i spent some time
in hatching plots
i wanted to
call all the shots
but
i don't need the world at my command
i just want someone
to hold my hand
i hoped that i would never stop
at least
until i reached the top
but i don't need to be so grand
i just need someone
to hold my hand
everything i ever loved
was lost
what i thought was mine
all tossed
flowing through my fingers
like sand
i need to hold
somebody's hand
at times
it seemed
there was always rain
and more and more
of too much pain
maybe
those things i could withstand
if i could hold somebody's hand
ever since i was a confused youth
i've tried
but never known the truth
i wouldn't need to understand
if i could hold
somebody's hand
Copyright © David Crandall | Year Posted 2025
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