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If I Could

If I could, ...I'd stroll with you in a lovely Autumn wood and gather every golden leaf to save them in a book on each one we'd write our dreams and all our special thoughts to read throughout our lifetime of the joys that we've partook. If I could, ...I'd climb the highest mountain I can find and reach into the heavens, to take down every star I'd put them in a velvet box and keep them by my side to light your darkest midnight in your search for who you are. If I could, ...I'd find a stream, a gentle babbling brook, and squirrel away each precious stone, each memory we've made, each pebble strewn across your life to keep you warm and safe, and gentle thoughts of you and I, will make you unafraid. If I could, ...I'd ride a wave from Auckland to Peru and capture every pearl I can, with love I will imbrue, I'd weave them with a thread of gold and keep them in a bag and write upon a golden tag, "This wisdom's just for you." If I could, ...when time draws nigh and life is near its end, and when your final tear drop begins to fill your eye I'll lie myself beside you and hold you in my arms, with tender touch, my soft warm lips will kiss your tear drop dry. and... If I could, ...lying there with bag and box and book hand and hand in whispered hush, I promise that I'll try to speak of simple pleasures, and moments that we've shared of dreams of us together as eternity goes by. 08/14/16

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Date: 2/6/2021 7:05:00 PM
Wow ~ a FAVE for me, James. So glad to find this beautiful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~ congrats
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Date: 6/5/2020 3:58:00 PM
The one word for this: POIGNANT and only as YOU can do it, Ralph. You are so gifted.(I see someone saying, "i'm with CATie on this one. But Catie's comment is not even there. I wonder what happened with CAtie??)
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James Inman
Date: 6/5/2020 4:46:00 PM
I don't know, but I do remember a nice comment from her. Thanks for your nice comment as well.
Date: 6/1/2020 9:53:00 PM
James this is a love felt and shown in one's being for another. It is an intimacy we all should try to obtain with our partner. Love reading this piece of you...reflected in your words.
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James Inman
Date: 6/3/2020 2:03:00 PM
Hi Michael, this is one of my personal favorites. Thanks for visiting.
Date: 4/21/2020 9:30:00 AM
Beautifully crafted poem. Visually stunning. Ans so romantic. Awesome.
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James Inman
Date: 4/21/2020 12:19:00 PM
What a lovely comment. I like to write romantic poems but I find it difficult to think of myself as a romantic writer.
Date: 11/9/2016 5:04:00 PM
Very romantic, a gem. I hope you'll read mine with the same title; we are 47 & 48 on the hot 100...how weird is that?
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James Inman
Date: 11/16/2016 11:16:00 AM
Thanks Phil, same title and same form.
Date: 11/6/2016 1:19:00 AM
Superb, James, who ever this is for is a lucky lass, and obviously worthy. A #7 and a fave for me, thanks. Regards, Viv
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James Inman
Date: 11/6/2016 8:11:00 PM
Thanks Viv for the wonderful words.
Date: 11/1/2016 9:49:00 AM
The imagery and sentiment are stellar, a poetic beauty. Chris sent me your way, and I'm so glad he did. Enthralling read. 7+
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James Inman
Date: 11/2/2016 8:53:00 AM
A very kind comment Paloma, thank you (and thank you Chris). I hope you don't mind me saying I love your very poetic name, "Una Paloma de la manana."
Date: 11/1/2016 8:31:00 AM
I'm with Catie below, loved the line about writing our dreams on the fallen leaves, that was so beautiful. I wish I had thought of that. The entire poem is so filled with love and affection, this is an enchanting piece of writing.
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James Inman
Date: 11/1/2016 10:18:00 AM
Chris, thank you so much. I think the phrase, "I wish I had thought of that," is the best comment anyone could make.

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