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If I Could

If I could fly like my hero Peter Pan, I would be gone for sure. If I could walk like a runway model, I would step around the manure. If I could quarterback like Mahomes I would play ball day and night in the sun. If I could sprint like Bolt, I would do nothing but run.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/6/2020 8:39:00 AM

Hello Caren, that is a lot of If I Could. If only we could. Hugs Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/7/2020 3:09:00 PM

Hello Caren, you are welcome. Hugs Darlene.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/7/2020 2:15:00 PM

Thank you Darlene

Ray Zottola

Date: 7/17/2020 2:22:00 PM

Maybe you can do all those things. And if you decide to fly make sure you test those wings. I like short and sweet poems. You touched me on this one.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/18/2020 1:37:00 AM

I am ever so glad Ray Thank you

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/16/2020 9:19:00 AM

I really like this, Caren! Nice aspirational write; perfect rhyming!... You actually left me hungering for more, which can be a good thing... I THINK IT'S A GREAT CONTEST in the making! Maybe the next one you sponsor... At any rate, way to go! Thanks, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/17/2020 1:48:00 AM

I just realized I could make this into a little contest. I just may have to do this. Thank you for a terrific suggestion my friend!