If I Could

If I could pick a flower for you, the brightest I’d try to find If I could capture time for us, the clock I’d like to unwind Our moment could last forever, just as we want it to be If I could stop the river a minute from moving to the sea, I’d kiss the water, then move it along and send it on its way Knowing as time ticks, it will reach you on the beach one day Heidi Sands 11/22/19

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/25/2019 5:00:00 PM

Very, very sweetly sung!! Like sugar! :) gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/25/2019 5:18:00 PM

Thank you Gershon. That is great to hear :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/23/2019 6:47:00 AM

A charming poem in love filled verses--beautifully done, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/23/2019 11:53:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/22/2019 11:07:00 PM

I really love this. A fave. God bless you dear friend, Gina

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/23/2019 11:52:00 AM

Hi Gina. I am happy to hear you love this one and consider it a Fav. Thank you :)

Na Na

Date: 11/22/2019 7:49:00 PM

Hi Heidi this is beautiful. Thanks for sharing

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/22/2019 8:02:00 PM

Thank you Gregory. I appreciate your visit and comment. Have a nice weekend :)

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 11/22/2019 6:00:00 PM

Great! A fav for me

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/22/2019 6:41:00 PM

Thank you Timothy. I appreciate the Fav :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/22/2019 4:29:00 PM

Beautiful and heartfelt Heidi. Whoever this was written for is lucky to have you in their life.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/22/2019 4:37:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kindness Chris :)

Ann Foster

Date: 11/22/2019 3:55:00 PM

Lots of longing. Excellent write. Ann

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/22/2019 4:08:00 PM

Thank you very much Ann :)

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 11/22/2019 3:31:00 PM

A beautiful verse, Heidi - it flows as smoothly as "the river moving to the sea"! Glad you enjoyed Crises At The North Pole and thanks for taking time to comment. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours - Bob

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/22/2019 4:08:00 PM

Thank you Robert. I appreciate your kind feedback. I hope you have a Happy Thanksgiving too :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/22/2019 3:24:00 PM

I would love to see you "kiss the water" - sentimental loveliness Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/22/2019 3:25:00 PM

lol. Thank you Caren. I appreciate your visit and comment :)