If I Can

If I can, I shall Not if I cannot Recipe for a lifeline Deed follows thought

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Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 2/7/2021 10:55:00 AM

Great write Gerson. Deeds should follow thought.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/7/2021 4:53:00 PM

And when Deeds precede thought, watch out! ~ Fire, Ready, Aim?...

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/6/2021 10:24:00 PM

Of Course we can if we are able to only and then then once we have made our mind up, and we have made the time, we follow deeds in our mind that have perhaps been there a very long time. Hugs and Blessings - Nice one Gershon. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

J. Summers

Date: 2/6/2021 7:37:00 PM

“Deed follows thought” great poem Gershon. John

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/7/2021 4:50:00 PM

Appreciate your kind words, John! Peace and Tranquility, Gershon