If I Am -- You Are ( Part 5 )

If I am the Breath of Life : You are the Life I breathe YOU are the Daffodils the rebirth of Spring My Life anew If I am the grains of sand on the beach : You are the refreshing Ocean YOU are the Tears of LOVE, cascading down the drought of my Heart If I am a Weeping Willow : YOU are the Roots, the trunk keeping me strong YOU are the Everlasting LOVE, I have searched for and Finally Found To My FOREVER : Barbara Jean

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/31/2010 4:42:00 PM

Such a blessing to find one but then to find another is a double blessing indeed HG.. happy Easter to u and yours and a lovely emotional and deeply heartfelt write tonight... so enjoyed reading your creative poetic genius..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Lynette Chachere

Date: 3/31/2010 4:09:00 PM

Your love for a woman reveals such profound emotions.every poem that you express about your love is always true, because you hold onto it forever. I love you always(: -Always&Forever Your sister spirit Lynn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/31/2010 3:08:00 PM

Daffodils..my favorite. Thank you HG..these If I am pieces are so very lovely. I am so proud that you wrote them for me. See real mail. BG

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/31/2010 1:20:00 PM

wonderful!Charma

Susan Palli

Date: 3/31/2010 11:18:00 AM

So beautiful!