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If Dreams Came True

If I could choose a dream of mine, A dream that may come true, I would not choose a selfish dream For that would not be right. This dream must be magnificent And a benefit to all. The world right now is hurting And I must choose carefully. Would it be an end to cancer? A worthy dream indeed, Or perhaps an end to world hunger. I hear applause for that. No, I would dream that wars would end And peace would reign supreme. In every corner of the world, Each man would love his neighbor. If wars ended forever, the other dreams Could then at last come true, When energy we use to quarrel Is put to a better use. Two thousand years ago, He came To bring peace to the Earth, But foolish man defied Him and We slaughter one another. His simple message, "Love Thy Neighbor", Is all we need to make big dreams come true! Won 10th place

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Date: 3/21/2010 3:00:00 AM
Beautiful message you have here, Joyce. Congratulations on your winning this contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/20/2010 7:49:00 PM
Wonderful concept. Think how much money we would have for cures and research if it was not being spent on wars.
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Date: 3/18/2010 4:38:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your winning poem and placement in the Dreams Come True contest.. a most wonderful write and win for u to so enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/18/2010 1:51:00 PM
Many congratulations on your win in Carol's wonderful contest Joyce, to rid the world of the C, would be a super dream to come true >> James
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Date: 3/18/2010 12:22:00 PM
Congratulations for your win, Joyce. This is truly a beautiful dream... a perfect world...a heaven. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/18/2010 12:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/15/2010 12:29:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Joyce.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/14/2010 4:48:00 PM
Wonderful message in this dream....if only such dreams could come true....how lovely our world would be!! Lovely poem, Joyce! ~ Carrie
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Date: 3/14/2010 3:32:00 PM
Not surprised we share the same dream, Joyce. If we could bring peace worldwide, some of the other problems such as hunger would be diminished by nations working together. Cancer, however, seems to stump everyone regardless of nationality. Very moving poem! Wishing you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/14/2010 3:13:00 PM
SO TRUE VERY WELL WRITTEN LOVED IT FALESHIA
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