If All Your Dreams Were Nightmares

The mist slowly rises
curling its tail about a post
Coal black dust drips from corners
of memory's page
Drip
drip
drip
Shimmering black, surreal and cold
blood pools in its
Drip
drip
drip
Alone(forever) for now
Shimmering distance
It comes
growing larger, closer, clearer
iris of golden maroon
tears
Drip
drip
drip
from unseen gashes and tears
Blood (not) tears
Drip
drip
drip
from unseen gashes and tears
Shivering
cold,

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If all your dreams were nightmares
Dream of what a nightmare
would be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Fraser Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 6:48 AM
Wonderful poem Katrina>>James
Moreno Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 1:58 PM
Katrina, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
Mason Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 4:01 PM
Great imagery in this write and now it is a "first round survivor" ... smile ... congratulations to you, Katrina and good luck in the contest!
Brown Avatar
April 10, 2009 at 5:37 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Karina. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
November 3, 2008 at 8:01 AM
Karina, reminds me too much of the many Stephen King books I have read. Seriously creepy and well done. Congrats on being featured. Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
November 3, 2008 at 5:44 AM
Katrina you know this poem really hits home with me - I watched my mother drown at age 4 and I relived that memory in my dreams every time I closed my eyes for years - Congrats on being featured this week - God Bless
Brown Avatar
November 3, 2008 at 4:48 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week. Love, Carol
Mallett Avatar
November 2, 2008 at 6:05 PM
Very cool. Thanks for sharing.
George   Avatar
November 2, 2008 at 5:44 PM
powerful images painted in words, Katrina. Congratulations on your feature of the week. Lainie
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November 2, 2008 at 5:28 PM
Powerful way to make your point. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
November 2, 2008 at 4:59 PM
Congratulations Katrina on your poem being featured. God Bless the dreamers. Vince
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