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If I want to find peace with God, Of this pain I need to let go. And because there's no better way, I need to release it to God I know. So many things trouble my mind sometimes, But thinking in Jesus my heart glows For in His loving care I feel so safe. And with His divine assistance I can only grow. Sometimes the path I walk gets so narrow, And in my heart I feel the pain of arrows. But if I want to find peace with God, Of this pain I need to let go. Letting go doesn't come easy I know, But in the name of God I let it go. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2013 November,09,2014

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 11/17/2014 11:42:00 AM

Sweet D I have just written a poem being inspired by your "IF": Poem Title :"I must go on". Please comment. Love XXXX RAJAT

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 11/13/2014 1:16:00 AM

"Father, forgive them, because they don't know what they're doing" Christ prayed for those who betrayed him and crucified him. So let go..Love D xxxxx RAJAT

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/13/2014 1:27:00 AM

Rajat my dear friend thank you for your kind visit! :) xxxxx D

Eve Roper

Date: 11/12/2014 11:22:00 PM

To you my friend my blessings go.Dorian, another good write. :) eve and a 7 with that poem

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/12/2014 11:44:00 PM

Eve, my dear friend thank you for stopping by! :) xxxx D.