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September 29, 2023

"Etheree" Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Ink Empress

If my life is a dream, with layers of hopes, joys, sadnesses, love … will keep on dreaming, blissful days meandering like a brook, humming melody of longing, my nights are blessed with stars whispering soft with their susurrant voice! If my life is a blossoming flower, not all petals are smooth and uncrushed, it has weathered many wind-storms, it has embraced adoration, until its brightness faded... e v e n t u a l l y Fall appears, sprawl on ground gloomy, lost!

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Silent One

Date: 9/30/2023 2:53:00 AM

A lovely etheree with a fine selection of words.. i think all our lives are like a blossoming flower... none of us are evergreen... I think this will do well in the contest..

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/30/2023 6:54:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Poet. Yes, all of our lives bloom like flowers, but ultimately droop and fall. Your visit and encouraging comments are so appreciated!