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If I showed you my pain would you look at me another way, If I showed you my tears that fall from my face would you collect them and create my own special place , If I told you I hate the way I look would you hold my face gently and tell me I'm all the best chapters in your favorite book, If I told you to leave would you grab me ever so tightly and tell me baby you're all I will ever need, If I told you I'm so lost and drowning at sea would you build a boat and try and save me, If I told you please dont hurt me would you say I'd rather die then see you bleed, If if if that's all it will ever be if -just tal

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Date: 5/29/2020 5:45:00 AM
Talleah, I am sorry if this HURT happened. But your poetry is powerful, magnified by the three "ifs" in the last lines. Loved your unique similes and metaphors. Bless U
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