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If, For Instance

If, for instance.......you might imagine it all... Do try,... if you can....... Pretending, perhaps, that it was long ago.... And let's say,...that you were on the brink of discovery, 16 years old, and thinking the world lay at your feet. It is the last week of your sophomore year, and we would find you at a graduation party, mingling with friends, in the dwindling twilight Let us make it a sparkling, warm evening in June. Try to imagine, if you can, that over the yard and trees are strings of little lights, criss-crossed streams of light-beams twinkling like fireflies, over the patio, over the yard just as the swarm of summer stars are waiting to complete the scene... Someone may have even set up an old phonograph, so there could be dancing.... Say, for instance,..Johnny Mathis was singing "Chances Are".. And you are entranced, listening,...sipping a coke or something.. Now, imagine this great looking senior boy,... (whom you had seen around school, but had never met) ..walks over to stand by you..,.... can you picture it...? And let's just say, your heart is pounding nervously, and just when you thought you might faint... he asks you to dance! Of course you'll say yes!!,....Just imagine!!.... Imagine then, you are tongue tied....can hardly catch your breath! And when the song ends,...he doesn't let go of your hand?! And just about then, .more music fills the air... something rare, something beautiful... Something makes you swoon, it's "Moonglow"...just think about it! And the rhythm fits the mood..and your feet seem to move on air And let's say he begins humming softly, and his breath ruffles your hair.... and you close your eyes, he pulls you close, with your head resting with a sigh..... Then another song, another dance, the phonograph plays on.. And the music blends, and the night is long, and you hope the moment never ends And let's just say, it is very late and your parents will be waiting,.... So he asks to walk you home...and you say, ...well..of course you'll say yes!.... And finally....we might have to say.. ......well,.......what if..., what if from then on... he has been the only one who ever,......ever again, walked you home? We might just say that,......if only,.... if only you can imagine...... _________________________________________________________ True story :)

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Date: 10/10/2015 11:46:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 10/8/2015 2:28:00 AM
Wonderful write Carrie! Congrats on superb win!
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Date: 10/7/2015 4:51:00 PM
Oh, come out and tell me, was he? I imagined it all so well and now you are leaving me to determine my own ending. I like romantic movies with definitive endings! Such an enjoyable write, Carrie - very pretty and well-written ... CayCay
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Date: 10/7/2015 5:15:00 PM
Yep........as hard as it is to believe......we were young, and he was the one!! (Still is !! ) Weren't we the lucky ones ??!! :)
Date: 10/7/2015 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations.
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Date: 3/23/2014 10:03:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine win with this awesome poem, carrie
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Date: 3/23/2014 5:18:00 PM
A lovely story Carrie ! Big congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 3/20/2013 6:14:00 PM
Congrats Carrie ...Donna
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Date: 3/20/2013 1:40:00 AM
Dear Carrie,Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Congratulations on YOUR Winning POEM "If,for instance" in the contest "One of YOUR Greatest Days" Sponsored by Dan Kearley. What an Amazing story of LOVE. YOUR Husband is a Fortunate Man I enjoyed how YOU told it like A Sixteen Year old girl would.Superb Pen.I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 3/19/2013 10:19:00 PM
Carrie, your poem is just beautiful, what a lovely way and day! Congratulations with your amazing poem, always~ LINDA
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Date: 11/30/2011 10:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P. D.'s "first love poem (on the soup)" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2011 8:45:00 AM
This is so great Carrie. It took me there. Even the music is as I would remember it. So real. I hope this is our story. Congratulations
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Date: 11/28/2011 11:13:00 PM
Congratulations again, Carrie. I do remember this sweet one. Was it YOUR story?
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Date: 11/28/2011 11:13:00 PM
ps. DId I tell you I really like your avatar?
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Date: 11/28/2011 10:07:00 PM
CARRIE,.. Congratulations on your wonderful win, IN MY "first love poem on the soup" CONTEST* I would also like to thank you for the support. Take care, and have yourself a great night,. ;-) ~p.d.
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Tavarus Moreland's contest "Is She The One". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/7/2010 9:23:00 PM
I enjoyed the novelty in the poem and how you unfolded the entire verses. It was like watching a romance movie.
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Date: 9/5/2010 9:26:00 PM
Beautifully written ode to a different time and emotions. Congrats, Carrie, on this winner. Dan C
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Date: 9/3/2010 1:21:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your second place win.. with this wonderful poem in Tavarus's contest Is She the One.. great prize .. guess we will be sharing as I also won second place... don't know yet..luv.. have a safe holiday weekend..
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Date: 4/16/2010 2:14:00 PM
I knew this one would be hard to beat! RAY
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Date: 4/15/2010 7:34:00 AM
AWESOME, Carrie, this is the same kind of thing I wrote about, except yours went ON forever it sounds like!! A belated congrats. how did I miss this one? Luv, andrea
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Date: 4/10/2010 11:23:00 AM
A great poem. Congratulationa. Joyce
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Date: 4/10/2010 6:04:00 AM
Congtas Carrie on your winning poem and placement in Gareth's contest with this brilliant write... enjoy your special moment of victory as u walk to the winners circle again..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 3/21/2010 6:26:00 PM
I can imagine! Thanks for refreshing my memory! RAY
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Date: 12/18/2009 8:28:00 AM
Carrie, Congrts on your win in Elaine's contest, so very well deserved my friend!! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/18/2009 8:19:00 AM
Thanks so much Carrie for your kind congrats and right back to you!!! Love you girlfriend! Hope the beautiful holiday spirit in your heart lasts all year through! Big hugs, shar XOXOXO
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