Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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26.07.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Three Options in I Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

1st place in the contest

- Idyllic -

                - Idull is a free pass to peace of mind - quote from poet

                           When peach colors swell in the evening sky
                                    an moment in a spiral of color
                              Sharing my adventures in the silence
                          In my smallness between heaven and earth
                                a silent song becomes a symphony
                                      I admitting my inadequacy
                                    behind the curtain of humility
                                It falls as jewels on my path tonight
                                         Idyllically near eternity
                             wish to hold on to this flawless moment

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Linda Alice Fowler August 1, 2025 at 9:07 AM I feel the peace and calm in your words Anne-Lise. Congratulations! :)

Constance La France August 1, 2025 at 6:14 AM Anne-Lise, congratulations on your win in my Three Options in I contest, I love your image and quote and your words are so beautifully penned, blessings ~

Tania Kitchin July 29, 2025 at 6:36 PM Anne-Lise, a beautiful poem and picture. Congratulations on your top win. -hugs

Krishnanand Guptar July 29, 2025 at 1:25 AM Congratulations , poet friend, on your top win in this contest with a lovely poem on an idyllic moment, swollen by peach colours, sharing your adventures when "a silent song becomes a symphony". Such a beautiful and inspiring picture. Wishing you an idyllic day.

Abdullah Alhemaidy July 28, 2025 at 12:59 PM Congratulations on your win dear lovely Anne-Lise!

Paula Goldsmith July 28, 2025 at 11:31 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Idyllic" write/quote with a great pretty picture. Hugs.... Have a blessed day with your win...........

Jay Narain July 28, 2025 at 10:59 AM Dear Anne-Lise, a graet poem. Congrats on your contest win.

Anne Winter July 28, 2025 at 3:05 AM Dear Anne-Lise, an absolutely gorgeous and pleasant write! I love love love this! Brilliant! The picture abd the way you've written this is just so gorgeous! Thank you so much for writing such a lovely write!

Sotto Poet July 28, 2025 at 12:35 AM Back with hearty congratulations on your contest trophy win, dear Anne-Lise. Hugs

Bj Legros Kelley July 27, 2025 at 6:25 PM Oh, I am so blessed as I read your poems, and your images that you share with each. This poem is indeed heavenly, and a fave. It is absolutely gorgeous <3

Sotto Poet July 27, 2025 at 10:43 AM The imagery and the deep meaning of those words are astounding. What you submitted for this contest is fantastic. Warmest Wishes

Rowena Velasco July 27, 2025 at 8:27 AM Such a calming, graceful piece. I felt completely swept into that peaceful, glowing moment. Beautifully written.

Sara Kendrick July 27, 2025 at 3:45 AM I know the feeling, Anne-Lise. Sometimes in nature there is beauty so precious that it makes a person want to stay there for as long as possible and for the pictured memory to linger on and on and on. It is wonderful when those moments come from deep within our memory banks in times of stress. I enjoyed this picture and your work that goes alongside. I saw after I posted this that it is for a contest so I believe it is a great contender. Way to goSara K

Victor Buhagiar July 27, 2025 at 1:22 AM Splendid in all departments. A great picture and a lovely poem. Your last two lines are flawless and beautiful. Hugs.

Arthur Vaso July 26, 2025 at 11:51 PM What a beautiful soothing poem.

Joseph P. DiMino July 26, 2025 at 7:28 PM "Idyllically near eternity wish to hold on to this flawless moment" -- Indeed, a flawless moment. Lovely, Anne. Thank you for sharing.

CayCay Godwin July 26, 2025 at 6:12 PM Oh, those moments we tell ourselves we'll never forget and so many of mine involve a vacation in a beautiful locale. A beautiful poem! CayCay

Jan Allison July 26, 2025 at 5:08 PM what a wonderful write Anne-Lise, a joy to read! hugs jan xx

sara Etgen-Baker July 26, 2025 at 4:36 PM I love what you wrote for this contest. The depth of your words and your imagery are breathtaking. Loved 'curtain of humility' enjoy your evening, Sara

Abdullah Alhemaidy July 26, 2025 at 2:05 PM Wonderful!