Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- Idyllic -

The soul becomes peaceful
                                 at the first breath of spring
                         The clouds float effortlessly and easily
                                 under the whole firmament
                                lets me drift along in wonder

                            Soft white chubby newborn lambs
                        as angelic children with fluttering ribbons
                                 fur dressed in pretzel spin
                           Intoxicated where the seconds tick by

                             The stream runs rippling by the mill
                        in lively laughter and passionate happiness
                                 lovely and idyllic to the eye


      
                                            01.03.2023
                                    Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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                                    I - words - Poetry Contest
                             Sponsored by: Constance La France 
                                       3rd place in the contest

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Robertina B. April 27, 2023 at 5:24 AM Really enjoyed your write, Sunshine!! Positive, refreshing, and definitely uplifting.. Beautiful visuals as well.. Many blessings to you, my friend! Anne-Lise Andresen April 28, 2023 at 2:08 PM - Thank you very much, Robertina :) - hugs

Constance La France April 3, 2023 at 4:39 PM Sunshine, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Nice image ! Anne-Lise Andresen April 28, 2023 at 2:07 PM - Thank you very much, Constance :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith March 7, 2023 at 7:14 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/picture. Hugs. Have a great day................... Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2023 at 7:56 AM - Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs

Joseph P. DiMino March 4, 2023 at 7:18 AM Wonderful portrait of peace and contentment. Lovely writing! Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2023 at 7:56 AM - Thank you very much, Joe :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes March 3, 2023 at 8:31 PM umm its ummm Yes its Idyllic. Just Lovely Anne-Lise Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2023 at 7:55 AM - Thank you very much, Wendy :) - hugs

Fin Chuuk March 3, 2023 at 7:53 PM WOW!! This is a masterpiece of art, Ms. Sunshine. Truly beautiful! :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2023 at 7:55 AM - Thank you very much, Fin :) - hugs

Thompson Emate March 3, 2023 at 7:48 PM A lovely poem. I love the metaphors. Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2023 at 7:55 AM - Thank you very much, Thompson :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds March 3, 2023 at 5:38 PM A poem as lovely as the first breath of Spring Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your placement in Constance’s contest… Belle :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2023 at 7:54 AM - Thank you very much, Belle :) - hugs

David Kavanagh March 3, 2023 at 1:54 PM The clouds float effortlessly and easily under the whole firmament, a beautiful stand out line for me Anne-Lise, smooth soothing poetry, best for contest, cheers David Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2023 at 7:54 AM - Thank you very much, David :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 3, 2023 at 10:17 AM The poem is abounding in peace, beauty and contentment, as is the picture. Loved it! Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2023 at 12:54 PM - Evelyn, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Harry Horsman March 3, 2023 at 6:29 AM truly wonderful poetry, Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2023 at 12:54 PM - Thank you very much, glad you liked it Harry :) - hugs

Gershon Wolf March 2, 2023 at 7:31 PM 'pretzel spin' - that's a new one for me. Never looked at lambs that way before! Kudos, Gershon Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2023 at 12:54 PM - The next time you see a little lamb .... think of pretzel spin, Gershon :) - Many thanks ... greatly appreciate your comment :)

Demetrios Trifiatis March 2, 2023 at 1:20 PM A work of art masterfully painted by your pen, dearest friend, Anne-Lise! A Fave. Blessings. Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2023 at 12:51 PM - Your fave means a lot to me, many thanks for the lovely comment Demetrios :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues March 2, 2023 at 10:46 AM Lovely imagery, my friend! Love your chubby lambs! Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2023 at 12:50 PM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Kim :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel March 1, 2023 at 7:17 PM A lovely place to be in, Anne-lise, you have excelled:) Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2023 at 12:49 PM - Jo, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Valsa George March 1, 2023 at 6:04 PM Such an idyllic and lovely scene you have painted, dear Smile ! Spring in all its beauty is paraded. All the Best, dear friend. Love and hugs Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2023 at 12:49 PM - Thank you very much for your kind comment, Valsa :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose March 1, 2023 at 3:55 PM Your poetry couldn't be any more idealistic than this little lamb. So adorable and sweet Sunshine ! Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2023 at 12:48 PM - Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Heidi Sands March 1, 2023 at 1:07 PM This is so beautiful. Great writing and great line fur dressed in pretzel spin. A Fave for me. Peaceful. :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2023 at 12:47 PM - Many thanks for your lovely comment and your fave on my poem, Heidi :) - hugs

Daniel Turner March 1, 2023 at 12:34 PM You had me after the first line, Anne. This is a lovely little poem and I hope it does well. Good luck:) Anne-Lise Andresen March 2, 2023 at 1:42 AM - Thank you very much, glad you liked it Daniel :) - hugs

Panagiota Romios March 1, 2023 at 11:15 AM Your poem is like a dream. Peaceful, calm and full of sunshine~ just like you. Pangie Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2023 at 11:32 AM - A little breath of spring... many thanks for the kind comment, Pangie :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit March 1, 2023 at 8:20 AM Beautiful poem, a joy to read--you convey lovely images and vibes of spring, Anne-Lies. Win BIG with this gem! Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2023 at 8:34 AM - It's been 14 days since I saw the first lambs this year ... (very early) ... many thanks for the lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar March 1, 2023 at 7:46 AM Your imagery is of the first quality. Best for a win. Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2023 at 8:28 AM - Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs

Sotto Poet March 1, 2023 at 7:43 AM You have produced such a lovely metaphor out of nature and poetry,  Anne-Lise.  Your poem is excellently made, and your thoughts are articulated very well. Enjoyed. GL and hugs Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2023 at 8:27 AM - Many thanks, Las ... greatly appreciate your comment :) - hugs