Idol Hands

I heard, idle hands are the Devils workshop
So I did my very best to keep busy
I worked, worked, worked, for the future
While so many others were taking it easy

Focusing on all the goals I must reach
All the while my life was flying by
Now here I am closer to the end
Missing so much and left to ponder why

My priorities wrong, I was in need of quiet
Moments that could have refreshed my soul
Time spent in nature away from it all
Pieces of idle, meant to make me whole

The devil, keeps us out of the garden
So that we don't contemplate the Lord
He tells us it's better, to keep our hands busy
if we're too quiet we'll surely be bored

Don't get me wrong, I value hard work
Yet in excess, these become Idol hands
Searching for happy, in material things
Failing to follow my Savior's commands

Thankfully He made this burden lighter
There are quiet times filled with rest
Thankfully there's peace, within balance
From God's hands I have been truly blessed



Inspired by Mel Merrill's short poem "Be There Still".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 4/17/2014 1:19:00 AM
veryu good and very true i have just been there myself and had a mini breakdown sometime we need some quiet time with the Lord
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Julie Clark
Date: 4/17/2014 11:43:00 AM
yes been much better lately God is good thank you
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/17/2014 8:10:00 AM
I hope you find the time you need. Thanks for commenting Julie.
Date: 4/15/2014 7:07:00 AM
Well said and I have found it so. Seems the more quiet I find to enjoy Him the more productive the remaining time is for me. Like the play with idle and idol.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/15/2014 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Faye, I am pleased you enjoyed this piece. Thanks for visiting my work.
Date: 4/9/2014 7:56:00 AM
Amen to ALL of this...seriously. I have to ensure myself each & every day to keep on this path. Very well said!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/9/2014 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Drake, your visit brings with it a smile.
Date: 4/9/2014 7:50:00 AM
Oh I love it! Idle hands versus Idol hands. Your mind spirals towards nuggets of truth and wisdom, picking up thoughts on the way that leave the reader stunned.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/9/2014 8:15:00 AM
I had to keep reworking this one, I still feel the flow is off a bit but I am glad it still resonates.
Date: 4/9/2014 7:19:00 AM
Another spiritual gem fom our Master of Words! Congratulations for your first book, Rick! What's the title? I must have it, with your dedicace and signature! I'm so proud of you! Love, Hanitra
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/9/2014 8:12:00 AM
DUMMY Hurting and Healing words. That is so cool that you want one. I sent some copies to Lebanon for my friend Eileen and she has read from it to her students. It is amazing to think that people on the other side of the world are experiencing a part of me. I will soup mail you Hanitra.
Date: 4/9/2014 12:37:00 AM
Richard, great poem! Luv it. And thank you for the acknowlegment at the end. You're a kind man and a good poet; pleasure getting to know you. Thanks again, mel
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/9/2014 8:13:00 AM
My Pleasure Mel.
Date: 4/8/2014 9:06:00 PM
Loved this one. You work in unusual topics... I love how you find the end in each one.
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Date: 4/8/2014 8:21:00 PM
Love Gordon Lightfoot myself, and thanks so much for the compliment, I'm flattered beyond words my friend. Love your write here also it's very true you have to find a balance between work and play, life is to enjoy. cheri
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/8/2014 8:37:00 PM
Thanks Cheryl, hugs Rick.
Date: 4/8/2014 8:01:00 PM
Stunning spiritual write Richard, Hugs Jan
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/8/2014 8:15:00 PM
Thanks Jan.
Date: 4/8/2014 3:01:00 PM
Beautiful poem Richard; the burden of life becomes easier when we get our priorities right; as you say, balance is a deciding factor. // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/8/2014 7:39:00 PM
Thanks Paul.
Date: 4/8/2014 2:56:00 PM
an intimate view of life's stages written with pure honesty, rich... this is supreme!.. huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/8/2014 7:39:00 PM
Thanks and a big hug back to you.
Date: 4/8/2014 8:19:00 AM
Oh Richard....Your wisdom astounds me. You are blessed with spiritual discernment....a gift of the SPIRIT. Lovely write. Bless you
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/8/2014 8:28:00 AM
Blessings to you as well Eileen.
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