Idea

Quatrain #853: IDEA In splurge of time feel abrupt sway, Dance of odd rhymes ushers new day; Edgy old chimes in a brief flash, And awkward mimes swirl final play. ~~~~~~~~~ Leon Enriquez 13 November 2017 Singapore

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/14/2017 11:25:00 PM

nice rhymed one, Leon!

Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/15/2017 7:17:00 PM

Dear Andrea: Thank you my friend. All the best then, Leon.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/14/2017 3:05:00 PM

Ahh!! Cute one..Enjoyed reading it..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/15/2017 7:17:00 PM

Dear Sara: glad this poem resonated with you my friend. All the best to you and yours, Leon.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/14/2017 2:35:00 PM

It is a joy to usher in the new day with your wonderful poem Leon. Thank you! : )

Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/15/2017 7:20:00 PM

Dear Connie: Glad this poem felt good for you. Thank you for your kind words. All the best for your journey. Leon

Eve Roper

Date: 11/14/2017 10:30:00 AM

Wow, I love your composing work, Leon. A wonderful visual you left. Hugs Eve

Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/15/2017 7:21:00 PM

Dear Eve: Thank you so much for your kind words. Glad this piece delighted you my friend. All my best to you and yours, Leon.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/14/2017 10:04:00 AM

I loved the second line of this quatrain, Enrique. Very lovely grouping of words. I love rhyming so I would love to usher a new day like that. Thanks for your visit to my poem.

Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/15/2017 7:23:00 PM

Dear Eileen: Thank you for your kind words and visit. Some people say that rhymes are too much. I happen to think that rhymes require much discipline and effort. So, I seldom write free verse, except for my haiku strings. All my best to you and yours, Leon.