I'D Rather Remember Christmas In July

I’d Rather Remember Christmas In July

Because we cannot rely that 
you’ll be alive beyond July, 
this year let’s have Christmas 
in Hawaii and in the month of July.

What a high that will be to scuba 
with Santa and ride waves
that seem  a mile wide.

Let’s kiss under the mistletoe,
Not in the snow drinking a cup of Joe,
But on the Hawaiian pier watching the undertow
Wearing our bikinis, swim trunks and flip flops,
Instead of our worn out matching house robes.

This year instead of presents,
Let’s give each other flowered leighs,
 And besides watching for Santa’s sleigh,
We’ll scout for him hanging ten on a huge wave.

Usually a yuletide carol is sweet in December,
But won’t it be bitter sweet 
when we look back and remember
Don Ho strumming his Hawaiian 
Christmas songs under a beach cabana
Where everyone’s legs are long, tan and limber?

It’s spending Christmas with you  
in Hawaii in July that I would rather remember 
When you’re gone in December.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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La France Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 7:58 AM
Hi Marie ~ just to let you know ~ your Certificate of Achievement was mailed today ~ you should get it in about one week ~
Brown Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 6:32 AM
Congratulations Marie on your win in Constance~The Rambling Poet's~" contest "Christmas in July For Lyrical And Lovely Ladies". Love, Carol
Gorelick Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 6:53 PM
Congrats on your win...A bittersweet piece. BG
Sweetheart Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 6:45 AM
BRAVO Marie.. congrats on your first place win with this wonderful write .. a marvelous entry.. and a perfect one for the contest.. enjoy your big victory and well deserved win..with luv..
Mitchell Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 1:40 AM
Congratulations on your first place win!
La France Avatar
July 25, 2010 at 8:48 PM
Congratulations Marie, on first place in my contest, Christmas in July for Lyrical and Lovely Ladies, this poem was exactly what we were seeking ~ could you contact me by soup mail with your address so I can mail your Certificate of Achievement in Poetry ~ Love Constance
Sweetheart Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 12:52 PM
Hey Marie .. I smell winner on this one my friend.. a wonderful Lyric entry for the ladies part of the contest.. good luck sweets.. enjoyed this creativity from u ..with luv..
Mitchell Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 6:09 AM
This expresses bittersweet emotions rather well. The end effectively gives a punch in the gut, to make the reader remember the poem. Good luck in the contest! : )
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