I'd Like To Feel Something Again
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in whirl and twirl we waltz around
feeling guised and chastised
raising brick laden walls
going 'bout our daily business
foiled and desensitized
plagued by the veil of apathy
once spring arrives and the sun shines bright
amazing how a walk in nature
can revive those dormant sluggish feelings
“I think we miss that touch so much, that we crash into each other, just so we can feel something." Crash, 2004
AP: Honorable Mention 2022, Honorable Mention 2021
Submitted on August 3, 2019 for contest KEEP IT BRIEF sponsored by NETTE ONCLAUD
Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2019
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