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Icy Love

love is like a sheet of ice, thin at the beginning but over time if it gets colder, and it thickens. but no matter what it can always break only if the right amount of pressure is applied to it. Love builds over time. it gets thicker and stronger. but if you apply the right pressure or make a bug mistake your love will break, crack and leave a wound and you will have to wait over time to mend that wound but when it cracks it will leave a scar...just like ice, and your flesh.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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