Icy Fingers

It is cold tonight, the winds fingers have 
ice on their tips. They run down your cheek
and arrest the colour, leaving them pale, 
pale as the stark moon that sulks the sky.
I walk with the sound of quick breathing
and pattering paws on a cobblestoned road,
dark shadows and strange silhouettes stalk
me around the lamplight. Summer has 
closed its door, the nights are longer and 
more melancholy. The darkness hides the 
colours as the think they see what is not 
there, and the neck hairs stand on end.
Yet there is a beauty in the freshness and 
the peace, the stars and drifting clouds.
Are not backs and greys, silver ad white
colours to. On we walk with the occasional
glance just to reassure that each others 
there, and for each other we always are.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chircop Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 2:32 PM
So beautiful,So beautiful indeed Daniel..Charma
Clark Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 8:03 AM
Ahhhh reminicent of night walks in winter in VT. Powerful vision. Jeralynn
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January 29, 2010 at 5:39 AM
Enjoyed reading today, hope your day is full of inspiration. :)
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January 29, 2010 at 5:36 AM
Hi Daniel... just want to say a big thankxxx to u for your wonderful comments on my poems... hope all goes well for u on this site.. my decision to leave is final... I have posted more information on the last poem just now... keep in touch... wish u well.. let u know where I land on a new site.. maybe u will join the many others who are leaving also... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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January 29, 2010 at 3:50 AM
A great poem Dan i enjoyed reading. Narrative i think it should be the form. Thanx for your comments on my poetry
Nutter Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 3:16 AM
Great imagery and I like the style you presented this work in.
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