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In the mild sun of a quiet winters afternoon the snow gives way to running rivulets of water softly flowing and dripping from the edges of trees and eaves yet the cold wintry air wraps her icy fingers around the little drops as they fall to the ground they freeze, newly born in icy tendrils hanging delicately, precariously from the edges of the world transforming the landscape into an icy shadow of itself.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/29/2009 1:10:00 PM
Creative and excellent! loved every word, felt every feeling.... nicely done....just loved it.
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Date: 4/28/2009 2:34:00 AM
Such an ephemeral phenomoma Trudy.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 4/26/2009 2:36:00 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Nuce job! Keep up the good writing. Best wishes. Karen
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Date: 4/25/2009 9:35:00 AM
This is lovely work, Trudy. Rather breathtaking in nature's wonders...the transformation you've described. ~Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/24/2009 9:08:00 PM
Such elegance in this write, Trudy! Those icicles have always ignited my curiousity. They seem to be gifts of winter spirits. Lovely poem!
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Date: 4/24/2009 5:38:00 PM
love the question/indent answer layout of this poem! you are extremely talented! Jim
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Date: 4/24/2009 5:38:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in your nature verse! Lovely Laura :)
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