Icicles

In the mild sun
	of a quiet winters afternoon
the snow gives way
	to running rivulets of water
softly flowing and dripping
	from the edges of trees and eaves
yet the cold wintry air wraps her
	icy fingers around the little drops
as they fall to the ground
	they freeze, newly born in icy tendrils
hanging delicately, precariously
	from the edges of the world
transforming the landscape
	into an icy shadow of itself.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Ahmad Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 1:10 PM
Creative and excellent! loved every word, felt every feeling.... nicely done....just loved it.
Strand Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 2:34 AM
Such an ephemeral phenomoma Trudy.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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April 26, 2009 at 2:36 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Nuce job! Keep up the good writing. Best wishes. Karen
Richards Avatar
April 25, 2009 at 9:35 AM
This is lovely work, Trudy. Rather breathtaking in nature's wonders...the transformation you've described. ~Love, Carrie
Devonshire Avatar
April 24, 2009 at 9:08 PM
Such elegance in this write, Trudy! Those icicles have always ignited my curiousity. They seem to be gifts of winter spirits. Lovely poem!
Mckenzie Avatar
April 24, 2009 at 5:38 PM
Wonderful imagery in your nature verse! Lovely Laura :)
Goff Avatar
April 24, 2009 at 5:38 PM
love the question/indent answer layout of this poem! you are extremely talented! Jim
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