Iceberg

Imagine, if you will,
intolerable temps,
indomitable force, 
incalculable mass,
imponderable strength,
ineffable presence,
interminably – here.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ligon Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 12:24 PM
I love the mystique of this, and it flows so nicely! Definitely deserves a higher placing.
Fowler Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 1:35 PM
Hello Juliet. So nice to see you. Many thanks for your encouraging words. So many fine entries in this one! :)
Flood Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 3:57 PM
And the winner is… the girl who ate the thesaurus. Congrats on your win with your multi syllabic entry, Linda.
Fowler Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 5:59 PM
Cheers Terry. You'll have to excuse me. I have something stuck between my teeth. ;);) Hey, thanks for stopping by with congrats Terry. And you should be chuffed with your win! :)
Anaya Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 10:06 AM
Congratulations on your win! The mighty iceberg reality, a force of nature truly. Chillingly described Laf-gal! BFF
Fowler Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 5:47 PM
Hey bff!!! They are beautiful, but mighty chilly! Love your poems! :) Thanks for stopping by and commenting with congrats!! hugs! laf :)
Canerdy Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 6:14 AM
CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive piece, Linda. Janice
Fowler Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 5:44 PM
Hi dear Janice. Thank you for reading and for your thoughtful comments. :)
George Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 1:11 AM
Icebergs are 'incalculable mass'. Rightly described. A beautiful Pleiades. Congratulations Linda on your win.
Fowler Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 5:43 PM
Valsa, thank you for stopping by with supportive words and congrats! :)
Buehler Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 12:27 PM
A masterfully crafted work. I love it, Linda. :)
Fowler Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 2:36 PM
Hi dear Evelyn. Thank you for the kind comment! :)
May Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 9:23 AM
Congrats on your win Linda, Nicely penned
Fowler Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 2:36 PM
Many thanks Joseph! :)
Miller Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 8:42 AM
Inimitable
Fowler Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 2:35 PM
So cool Terry...thank you! :)
Daniel Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 12:01 AM
An interesting and intricate poem on icebergs, Linda:)
Fowler Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 7:02 AM
I am glad you found this interesting and intriguing Jo. Thank you! :)
Wolf Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 7:44 PM
Oh, good. So glad it's not another long Chicago winter! lol!
Fowler Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 1:36 PM
I hope it's not too long gw! Cold - brrrr! :)
Brotherton Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 5:59 PM
The imagery your words conjure up leaves me with chills down my spine.
Fowler Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 1:35 PM
Thank you Jerry. A nice comment. The chills are a compliment, methinks! :)
Volumes Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 8:23 AM
Don't have to imagine Laf !! You have meticulously described each element of a mighty iceberg. Your wonderful Pleiades has lent rise to immaculate images indelibly inked into indicative intelligence so we not only see the massive iceberg but feel the cold it emanates. I wonderful poem Laf, Best of luck but I am sure you wont need it. Your entry is impeccable. love SV
Volumes Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 12:45 AM
;)
Fowler Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 9:35 AM
You have inundated me with indescrible interjections into interest and interaction with my iceberg. Many thanks my friend! ;);)
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