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Ice Storm

skating frozen pool slippery no control fall~ raining in bedroom

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/20/2021 5:03:00 AM

Nicely done, Eve. I hat it when it rains in my bedroom too ~

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 2/26/2021 11:51:00 AM

Leaking ceiling can be really dangerous. As the floor would be as slippery as the lake is... Great imagery Well penned

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/22/2021 6:45:00 AM

Not sure about the exact meaning of this one but I know it is not good to fall no matter where one falls. It has been some more winter this year for a large portion of America. Thanks for your visit. Sara

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/19/2021 3:09:00 PM

Nice poem about a leaking ceiling..

Judy Ball

Date: 2/18/2021 12:45:00 PM

I can remember it raining in my kitchen when a rim of ice formed at the edge of my roof and as the warm kitchen melted the ice it ran down inside the wall and flooded my kitchen. Nice job here. God Bless, JB

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/18/2021 6:48:00 AM

I’ve seen pictures of the ice in peoples homes from the burst pipes, very sad.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/17/2021 9:20:00 PM

This senryu reminds me that when you get older things inside become dangerous too.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2021 1:10:00 PM

Both can give us quite a fall, the pond and the wet floor!! Probably better to fall while skating!!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 2/17/2021 4:15:00 AM

Lovely haiku... God bless you with love and prayers, Gina

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/16/2021 10:47:00 PM

I thought this was a senryu, but then I'm not an expert on these short poems. ~~