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Ice In the Veins

A hot summer's day You are wearing sweater ~ hat Ice runs in the veins Date Written: 4/26/2022 "Note" My friend is always cold even in the summer. 1.) Ice In the Veins Pick-A-Title, Vol 30 - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/5/2022 10:45:00 AM

I have a friend like this - she bundles up like an Eskimo in 70 degrees.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/6/2022 9:19:00 AM

Thanks for your visit. Glad you like this "Ice In the Veins" write. That is my friend. "Bundles up like an Eskimo in 70 degrees." Have a great/blessed~ day/weekend.............

Jcb Brul

Date: 4/26/2022 4:08:00 PM

Nice one Paula! Summer is felt in this great haiku! All the best.^JCB

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2022 1:37:00 PM

Thanks for your visit. Glad you could feel Summer in this write. Have a great/blessed day.............

Bill Baker

Date: 4/26/2022 3:55:00 PM

Some people like it hot, some like it cold. Nice Haiku for the contest, good luck! Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2022 1:35:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and for your good luck. Glad you like this Haiku write. Have a great/blessed day.............