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War, Ukraine, Landscape, Girl, Emotion, Destruction

"No blood runs through his veins only endless ice that flows hate." Quote - Constance I know a man who is cold-blooded ice runs through his veins his eyes are dead his heart holds no mercy for the life of innocent mothers, grandma's grandpa's babies and children trying to flee his guns and bombs or for men and women fighting for what is theirs and he lies, lies and lies he is calm and controlled in a hellish way stone-faced he appears never upset seems calm and controlled in public (I wonder does he scream when alone) he is never afraid because he is like a serial killer he has no remorse and cannot get enough of death and destruction (I wonder do storms shake the ocean of his sleep) he even sacrifices his own soldiers and people to feed his eternal greed he could care less if they starve or die oh, the devil dwells in this man's heart as hate a heart where no love could ever exist no sadness could ever pour for anything precious would just wither this is a man created by the devil to destroy life I think he must suffer from some serious mental issues that only get worse with time he sees himself as a KING hiding in his castle of gold surrounding himself with brain-washed followers hate tells him that he is indestructible he is a rolling stone crushing all in his way but one day . . . one day this wicked, evil man will fall devoured by the devil he loves I loath to say his name but you know him _______________________ April 25, 2022 Poetry/Free Verse/ice in the veins Copyright Protected, ID 04-1450-906-25 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Title Chosen - Ice in the Veins Written for the Standard contest, Pick-A-Title, Vol. 30 sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Judged 05/30/2022 First Place

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Date: 5/30/2022 8:27:00 AM
Yes, unfortunately, we do know him ~ the one who spreads sadness. Why is he allowed to live? Your poem describes evil eloquently. ...do storms shake the ocean of his sleep" is beautiful. Congratulations on First Place!
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Date: 5/31/2022 1:17:00 PM
Ann, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations, I felt compelled to write about this evile man with ice in his veins, blessings ~Constance
Date: 5/30/2022 7:13:00 AM
Attractive title. "devoured by the devil he loves" - Wow! Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/30/2022 7:29:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratultions, blessings ~Constance
Date: 5/29/2022 9:45:00 PM
We all know his name..... ! The one who scalds the whole of humanity with the fire of his hate.... ! Beneath his calm facade, he may have a turbulent heart ! If not now, he is sure to have it in future. Cruelty and villainy cannot go unpunished for long. Now he may be cold like ice, but may later boil like a cauldron. Congratulations, Constance on your top win....
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Date: 5/30/2022 7:34:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the congratulations, and comment and I agree with every word you wrote, blessings ~Constance
Date: 5/29/2022 7:12:00 PM
Constance, sincere congratulation on taking first place with your remarkable poetry! You are more than deserving of it.
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Date: 5/30/2022 7:35:00 AM
Sotto, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 5/29/2022 4:13:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this magnificent poem, Constance:-) Loved this powerful write! I don't blame you for not saying his name. Putin is the devil.
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Date: 5/30/2022 7:36:00 AM
Edward, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest, and for my wonderful placement and the comment, congratulations and compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 4/26/2022 11:44:00 AM
I don't know how anyone could look at all the destruction in the Ukraine and believe they will leave this earth better than they found it! Write on! Aloha!
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Date: 4/26/2022 12:14:00 PM
Rico, thank you so much for visiting my poem and commenting. It is hard to look at the destruction and death in Ukraine and not be affected, peace ~Constance
Date: 4/25/2022 4:29:00 PM
Constance, this is the epidemy of truth, and I as well loathe this devil incarnate. Hugs to you beautiful soul, we will hopefully see his castle fall before he is able to murder anymore innocents soon. God bless you my friend. <3 ~BJ
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Date: 4/26/2022 6:05:00 AM
BJ, thank you so much for the comment, I hope to see this evil man fall during my lifetime ~Constance

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