Ice Cream Train

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Children tales

written 7/17/2023

Chugging down the tracks, kids ride the zoo train. Each holds an ice cream cone while it does rain. It winds all through the zoo park Slow melting flavors does mark With pleased hearts, sticky hands to entertain.

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Jan Allison

Date: 7/29/2023 4:02:00 PM

what a cute poem Eve, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Len Gasun

Date: 7/24/2023 4:44:00 AM

An adorable poem. I can imagine those kids and wished a prepared tissue papers on the train. Congratulations my dear poet friend Eve! Thanks for sharing. I love and enjoyed your limerick. Blessings to you always.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/23/2023 1:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A creative write/picture. So Cute. Have a great day/week.......................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2023 12:18:00 PM

Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/23/2023 5:04:00 AM

Eve, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet limerick!

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/22/2023 6:39:00 PM

I can certainly picture this scene! Congrats on your win, Eve! Blessings, Kim M

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/17/2023 6:27:00 AM

I can see and feel the kids' joy, enjoying ice cream, while on a train ride. Both thrilling for the young mind. Buoyant poem, Eve.