Ice Cream

Hair, the color of ripened wheat,
with the sun shinning upon it.
Eyes, so clear a green,
shot with gold, as to be jewels.
A smile that reaches her eyes
and casts a glow from within.
Five tiny fingers grasp an aged hand,
with the delicacy of fine porcelain.
Two small feet, lively tapping,
in an excited tempo.
A Grandfather walks, stooped, 
along beside her, with pride
evident in the smile he affords others.
His hat, a dapper angle,
upon his head of snowy fringe.
His one hand held by hers,
while in his other, a few wrinkled bills,
held aloft as a trophy.
I stop and watch their approach.
I watch as they pass beside me on the path.
As the two, young at heart,
head for the colorful, ice cream truck
parked at the curb.


Entry For Free verse Contest
Placement: 8th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 2/23/2011 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Free Verse Seriously". A well deserved win Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/15/2011 4:05:00 PM
Very descriptive work. Congratulations on winning in the contest with this entry.
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Date: 2/14/2011 4:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win in the "Free Verse Seriously" Contest, Paula! I enjoyed this one as always. Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/12/2011 2:28:00 PM
Hi Paula - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Debbie's contest! Best wishes, Kory
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Date: 2/11/2011 5:20:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your big win in Debbie's contest with this amazing entry and super title ... enjoy sweet success my friend so well deserved with luv..
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Date: 2/8/2011 4:46:00 PM
Delightful.....and yummy, and warm (not the ice cream, however) loved it!!
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