Ice Cream

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A plethora of ice cream flavors, vanilla, strawberries, bubble gum, pistachio, butter toffee, and butter rum. Dismay not, my tongue like them all, In a crystal dish, deemed that I would, Smooth and yummy, I want that in my tummy, This afternoon I can have it. but, only if I study. Written: June 19, 2022 Ice Cream Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Valsa George

Date: 6/22/2022 9:43:00 AM

This poem from the angle of a child is interesting and equally fascinating ! Children are never tired of eating any number of ice creams. All flavors suit them and parents generally tempt them to study more with offer of ice cream.... ! A lovely poem, dear friend !

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/20/2022 2:03:00 AM

lovely poem with surprise ending.

Robert Gorelick

Date: 6/19/2022 6:30:00 PM

You say Ice cream you scream we all scream for Ice cream. But I say shoot the sherbet to me Herbet. But we all say-Hurray for Sorbet! Reminds me of good old days. Good luck in the contest

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/19/2022 2:27:00 PM

I really like this one, Lasaad:-) I'm screaming for ice cream right now! lol. Good luck in Julia's contest.