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Ice Cream, You Scream, We All Scream For Ice Cream

Out in the sun ice cream runs down someone’s sad face Fun will begin once again, when the chin is clean, A few more dimes just in time, will buy nine more cones! Ice cream for all as we sprawl, in the shawl of shade ...................................................................................................................................... In honor of Dr. Ram Mehta's Contest: "Than-Bauk"

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Nancy Jones

Date: 8/15/2011 5:53:00 PM

ummm... like 67 dimes is a few???... Neat write, Carrie :) And NO, it's not to late to edit. Appreciate the thinkin' you're doin'. From the entries so far, I am thinkin' 'bout posting another blog entry on odes. We'll see.. On another note, DO enter Syd's contest.. would love to read your write on it!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/10/2011 8:12:00 PM

hard form, I can't seem to get inspired by it? GOOD one! Thanks for your sweet tanka comment seems no one on this sight cares? LOL Love Ya

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2011 12:42:00 PM

Thank you for posting your excellent poetry that we all may enjoy reading it Carrie. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/9/2011 8:54:00 PM

Very cute entry. Remember when the ice cream man came in a truck through neighborhoods. Soup mail coming, Carrie. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/9/2011 7:50:00 PM

Great showing of poetry! Good luck in the contest!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/9/2011 4:37:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, Carrie

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/9/2011 4:32:00 PM

good luck ing the contest. john