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Ice Cream, You Scream, We All Scream For Ice Cream

Out in the sun ice cream runs down someone’s sad face Fun will begin once again, when the chin is clean, A few more dimes just in time, will buy nine more cones! Ice cream for all as we sprawl, in the shawl of shade ...................................................................................................................................... In honor of Dr. Ram Mehta's Contest: "Than-Bauk"
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Jones Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 5:53 PM
ummm... like 67 dimes is a few???... Neat write, Carrie :) And NO, it's not to late to edit. Appreciate the thinkin' you're doin'. From the entries so far, I am thinkin' 'bout posting another blog entry on odes. We'll see.. On another note, DO enter Syd's contest.. would love to read your write on it!
Guzzi Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 8:12 PM
hard form, I can't seem to get inspired by it? GOOD one! Thanks for your sweet tanka comment seems no one on this sight cares? LOL Love Ya
Brown Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 12:42 PM
Thank you for posting your excellent poetry that we all may enjoy reading it Carrie. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 8:54 PM
Very cute entry. Remember when the ice cream man came in a truck through neighborhoods. Soup mail coming, Carrie. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn
Sivey Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 7:50 PM
Great showing of poetry! Good luck in the contest!!
Mehta Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 4:37 PM
Thanks for the entry, Carrie
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