Ice Breaker

The limbs of the tree are now cold and barren
as they reach up into the sky above
searching for what was lost,
as the playful, fallen leaves are now gone,
taken away with the winds of time.

Nothing but a gray cloudiness
overtakes the skies
the warm sunlight disappears
more and more each day
as the darkness closes in.
Frigid winds come down from the North,
bringing with them a reckless abandon
with no care for the warmth
of the human heart.

Cold raindrops evolve into icy snowflakes
that fall for miles 
before they reach the earth
and are caught by the barren arms of the tree.
The world is now silent in the grace of wintertime.

A stubborn chill surrounds the human heart
trying to instill itself into every chamber
yet, it cannot end the beating drum
when there is a song of happiness
dwelling there forevermore.

Some days the sun still shines,
yet, it changes nothing
the warmth lingers somewhere else,
until the sun decides to stay
a little more each day.

Eventually, the warm-hearted will melt 
away the frost around them.
The frozen ice will begin to thaw and disappear,
soon a small crack forms, and spreads across
separating the ice
where a trickle of water is finally free to flow
out into the warmth of springtime.
And the world comes back to life,
re-awakening and reborn again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ebbs Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 7:19 AM
The re-awakeing is always beautiful, congrats Kelly :)
Deschler Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 11:07 PM
Yes, it is always something to look forward to, Ed... Your kind congrats are much appreciated!
Haight Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 7:12 PM
Such a lovely poem, Kelly, filled with visions of Winter's reign and the passing of her days to Spring. Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra
Deschler Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 12:25 AM
Thank you for your lovely comments, Sandra. They are very much appreciated!
A   Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 3:02 PM
Kelly, Congratulations in "Winters End contest." Have a nice day. LINDA
A  Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 10:58 AM
Thank you for this Kelly. Congratulations <3 thank you 4 supporting my "Winters End" contest. Forever ~SKAT~
Davis Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 9:04 AM
Kelly What a wonderful wintery write. The imagery and descriptive lines make the reader feel the chill and coldness in each line. Thank you for the great comment on my Friends Help You poem.
Deschler Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 7:01 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, as well, Robin. I do appreciate it! :)
Ryerson Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 3:42 AM
Kelly - This poem is a perfect example of a Metaphor...Read it serveral times and I'm gonna fav it so I can study it and learn from you...Congrats - Tim
Deschler Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 9:21 PM
Thank you so much, Tim! I really do appreciate the fav! I don't write metaphorical poems very often, but maybe I should be doing more. You are one of the few who have noticed the metaphors in this poem! Thanks, once again, Tim! :)
Mohn Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 3:35 PM
Hi Kelly, I'm from Minnesota and feel what you are saying - Great writing!
Deschler Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 9:08 PM
Hi Dave, I live in Wisconsin, and after this long winter I think we are all hoping for an early spring this year! Thank you very much for the kind comments. I do appreciate it! :)
Mehta Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 5:01 AM
Wonderful poem penned well and congrats on the win, kelly
Deschler Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 5:44 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Dr. Ram! I appreciate it very much.
A  Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 4:18 AM
Kelly:) Awesome win.... Take care Love *Skat
Deschler Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 5:42 PM
Thank you so much, SKAT! You take care, too. :)
A   Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 4:00 AM
Hi Kelly, , Congratulations! Thank you for the support ~LINDA~
Deschler Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 5:31 PM
You're welcome, Linda! Thank you so much for my placement in your contest! :)
Secrest Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 7:22 AM
Great write! Wintertime struggles are known to us all. I personally want to sleep until spring. But there is a certain beauty in the winter. Beautifully written!!!
Deschler Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 10:31 PM
Thank you so much, Heather! I know exactly what you mean. I live in Wisconsin, and it seems like spring is never going to arrive here. But, winter is one of my favorite seasons, so I want to enjoy the beauty of the snow, while I still can. :)
Mehta Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 6:58 AM
Wonderful piece of a poem, congrats on the win, kelly
Deschler Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 5:17 PM
Thank you so much for the kind comments, Dr. Ram. I am so glad that you enjoyed my poem!
Mcdaid Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 8:12 AM
extremely beautifully penned dear friend
Deschler Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 11:14 PM
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment, Liam. I always appreciate your kind words, my dear friend! :)
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February 7, 2014 at 7:39 PM
Winner List: Impress me III! (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio V. are posted and I will: Congratulate you with your winning poem,Kelly !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Deschler Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 10:10 PM
Thank you for stopping by with such kind words, Anne-Lise. I appreciate it very much! :)
Situation Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 3:57 PM
but for now get use to this cold unrelenting freeze. it sounds nice though.
Deschler Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 9:58 PM
I have lived in Wisconsin for my entire life, so this bitterly cold weather is nothing new to me! Thank you for the kind comments. I appreciate it very much!
Onclaud Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 2:56 PM
how stunning can this work be with your lyrical words, kelly... so nice to read you again!.. wow; huggs!
Deschler Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 5:44 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words, Nette! I am so glad that you enjoyed my poem. It was so nice to have you stop by again! Hugs! :)
Andresen Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 2:55 PM
- Really a skilled and well written poem, Kelly! - I enjoyed reading it. - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Deschler Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 5:15 PM
Thank you very much for the kind comments, Anne-Lise! I am so glad that you enjoyed my poem. I appreciate you stopping by. And, I hope that you have a great weekend, too. :)
Kendrick Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 1:56 PM
I am looking forward dor the re-awakening and reborn..It will soon be here but it seems like it is going to take forever..Your presence at my work inspires me to continue..Thanks..Sara
Deschler Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 4:24 PM
This has been a really long, cold winter, and I think that I am ready for a nice, warm spring! It will be here before we know it!...You're welcome, Sara. Thank you for your kind visit, as well.
Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 8:48 AM
wow, what a splendid poem. You are really being influenced by the icy coldness of this year I think. I just loved this line you wrote: the world is now silent in the grace of wintertime.
Deschler Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 4:12 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea! I always appreciate your kind words. The bitter cold has been hard to escape this winter, so I think it has influenced my writing quite a bit.
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February 5, 2014 at 1:53 PM
I enjoyed it. please visit my posts
Deschler Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 11:18 PM
Thank you, Mohammad! I am glad that you enjoyed my poem. And, I will be visiting your posts soon!
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