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Four corners conceal a flawless attraction white waters flow at the base of perfection standing in reflected pools quenching thirst sparkling heated moments about to burst inscribed fragments ignite comfort cooling down everlasting delight Chilled thoughts in a summertime breeze cloudless whispers soaking in the peace sucking down pleasure carry me home mixed moments of effervescence roam --swaying a sunny day away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/31/2017 12:51:00 AM
Very COOL, Tim. It's like a mixture of other forms around the little acrostic! Love that last line!!
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Date: 5/30/2017 7:59:00 AM
Love that one, pour me a drink!
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Date: 5/29/2017 10:33:00 PM
Nice on a hot summer's day :) Very nice Tim <3
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Date: 5/29/2017 8:04:00 PM
You had me at the title, and I liked this so much I read it twice, a double, so to speak!!
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Date: 5/29/2017 4:37:00 PM
Oh you're making me craving for summer. Long Island is still cold and more rain this year. Not complaining to Mother Nature just craving for summer.. Lol! Beautiful write Tim :)
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Date: 5/29/2017 4:02:00 PM
Wow, this is a neat one Tim. I really like it :)
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Date: 5/29/2017 2:16:00 PM
- Sounds delicious, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/29/2017 1:56:00 PM
This was gorgeous my friend. Such a beautiful piece on a hot summer day.
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Date: 5/29/2017 1:38:00 PM
I loved reading your beauty this evening Tim.
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Date: 5/29/2017 1:47:00 PM
Thanks Charma...I need a chilled drink after the yard work...a beautiful sunny day : )

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