Ice

÷÷÷÷÷÷÷÷÷÷÷÷÷÷ dark feathers in ice pinioned maps to warmer climes preserved until spring ÷÷÷÷÷÷÷÷÷÷÷÷÷÷ Date: December 28, 2022 Count: Syllablecounter.net

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/5/2023 4:40:00 PM

Lycia, congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. A great verse with ice cold imagery. Many blessings to you

Lycia Harding
Date: 1/15/2023 5:35:00 AM

Thank you, Eve!

Hilo Poet

Date: 1/4/2023 5:34:00 PM

Liking my fair leisure in the imagery, Lycia, my compliments on your win, Aloha William

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/4/2023 4:17:00 PM

Lycia, love the bird imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/28/2022 9:12:00 PM

I've been a fan of your poetry for quite a while, Lycia, I really like the contrast here of the dark feathers against the ice, and how it compares to the cold and warm climates (or maybe I'm over thinking it!) But just beautiful~

Lycia Harding
Date: 12/29/2022 3:05:00 AM

Thank you, Michelle. You're not overthinking it, you got it just right. What an appreciative eye you have!