Ice

crackling of water echoes in the empty trees …a pond held hostage 12/27/2022 How Many Syllables

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/5/2023 4:29:00 PM

John, congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. A great verse with ice cold imagery. Many blessings to you

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/5/2023 9:30:00 AM

Back with "Congratulations" on your win. I enjoyed your "Ice" write. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/5/2023 4:03:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Meanwhile, by God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy from the Lord toward a prosperous New Year 2023 along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Arlo Parker

Date: 1/4/2023 7:32:00 PM

Just the right glimpse of winter. Congratulations. ;o]

Julie Draper

Date: 1/4/2023 5:48:00 PM

This is a wonderful haiku John. The clear winner for me. I especially love the last line. Congratulations :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/4/2023 4:11:00 PM

John, a wonderful haiku, love the last line, congratulations on your first place win!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/28/2022 9:55:00 PM

Very descriptive, I can see the bare trees and iced over pond, best of luck in the contest~

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/28/2022 1:40:00 PM

Ice is fun to look at but not be out in. Only in tea/coffee please. Have a great day writing away..............