Ice-cream with daddy edited version of ice-cream wish
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'Ice-cream with daddy' is an updated version of the recently submitted poem ' ice-cream wish' although a rough copy I will not delete from my profile , poems such a 'ice-cream wish I enjoy looking back on to see how ive progressed as a writer...
Both versions I love. I hope you do too xx
Strawberry,
Vanilla,
Banana split
Maybe I will have it in a cone, filled will one scoop of triple chocolate chip.
Don’t forget the rainbow sprinkles and cherry sauce that sticks~ Napkins at the ready for any melting messy drips.
Daddy said my brain would freeze if eaten much too quick~ i laughed when daddy’s tongue turned blue from the ice lolly he licked
How will i be able to choose which one to pick~ Imagine I could taste Each yummy flavour, altogether in a dish.
To every day have ice-cream
That would be my wish
Breakfast, lunch and dinner, without ever feeling sick.
The flavour I decided to have today was this~
Rocky road with chocolate toppings, shaped like little fish.
I love my daddy, And I love our ice-cream trips.
Copyright © Julianne Williams | Year Posted 2024
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