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I Would Say

When I would lose the light on my way For me a lamp I know you would light Hold my hands, don’t leave, I would say. In engulfing darkness if I wander away You would not disappear from my sight When I would lose the light on my way. The edge of my worn out time may fray If from the falling sky ruins on me alight Hold my hands, don’t leave, I would say. Dark hours of despair thicken and stay I would think it’s my life’s ordained plight When I would lose the light on my way. I would plunge deep within me and pray If I don’t see the day break after the night Hold my hands, don’t leave, I would say. Ignite a fire to light me in your divine ray I would make my pole star shining bright When I would lose the light on my way Hold my hands, don’t leave, I would say. Written : October 29, 2017 Contest : Strand Select E, Any Form, Any Theme Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 2/6/2020 4:01:00 PM
Congrats on your win my friend!;)
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Date: 11/18/2017 8:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Subimal.
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Date: 11/6/2017 12:23:00 AM
A beautiful write, Subimal, and a well-deserved win - I love the rhythm in this one, and the poignant message! Congrats on your win, Friend! :-)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 11/6/2017 12:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, Greg for visiting and for words of appreciation.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 11/6/2017 12:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, Greg for visiting and for words of appreciation.

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