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I Would

I would If I would meet the girl I was So many years ago I would sit down and chat with her And make sure that she’d know I’d let her know that she was smart Courageous and delightful I’d tell her to be sweet and nice And never to be spiteful I’d make sure that when I’m with her She feels appreciated I’d give her reason to believe She won’t be underrated I’d warn her about thoughts and moods That ruin self-assurance To be alert and fight them off Each time, at each occurrence Another thing I’d tell her quick For there is no privilege greater She must become a servant of The Almighty Creator And I’d teach her to be gentle To be courteous, to be real She must become a lady With a mysterious appeal So I’d give her all my wisdom I’d share without restraint I’d teach her how not to become The person that I ain’t And after a good many years I’d look her up to see If she grew up and turned into Nobody else but me.

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Date: 5/11/2018 12:31:00 PM
I love this one. It reminds me of a piece I wrote in my book, where I became my own father. I’m surprised there have not been other comments, this is really well written.
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Wendy Nipas
Date: 5/11/2018 1:39:00 PM
Thank you. I think people are thrown off by the length of poems, not knowing that oftentimes that's where the jewels are hidden. Thank you for taking the time to read this one. I used it not long ago to encourage an elderly lady who felt sad and lonely. She cried after reading this, because it brought back so many memories. It it encouraged her to be happy and thankful for what she had. One of my favorites.

Book: Shattered Sighs