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I Worked In Her Shoes

I am not sure what size shoes I now wear, it is hard to be small with skin so fair. Wishing I was reading in a big chair instead I wipe my eye from a big tear. My heart smiles when others can takeover, this wheat is heavy not light like clover. Back breaking work not fit for any child this hard work can make an adult go wild

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Eve Roper

Date: 8/28/2023 12:35:00 PM

Thank you for your creative poem for the contest. Congratulations on your win. Eve

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/28/2023 1:13:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my creative write. Thanks for having the contest and for the placement. I enjoyed writing it. Have a great day writing away........................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/28/2023 12:25:00 PM

"4 Place" ~ I Worked In Her Shoes ~ Date Written: 7/31/2023

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/28/2023 6:30:00 AM

Paula, Congratulations on your win, which is truly deserved, as your poem is a masterpiece crafted with such exquisite precision and beauty.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/28/2023 1:11:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you found this write to be a masterpiece crafted with such exquisite precision and beauty. Your words are so very kind. You have made my day. "Thank You" Have a great day writing away........................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/3/2023 9:00:00 AM

It is sad that so many young people have had to take on the role of an adult because of poverty from one reason or another. Creative work you have penned. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/3/2023 10:11:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my write. Yes, very sad when a child needs to be an adult. Have a great day writing away........................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/31/2023 1:52:00 PM

I Worked In Her Shoes ~ Date Written: 7/31/2023