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I Woke Up One Mornin'

What chance does a feller have to make it these days? With so much temptation offered in so many ways. My spirit was weak and I had a will to commit. To a Hell raising life free from backbone and grit. I was using cocaine and whiskey to play silly games. And had found me some friends to share in the pain. But I woke up one mornin' doused in chaos and sin. And looked around sadly at the mess I was in. When a shimmering light from the window answered my plea. I threw my beer at the mirror and fell to my knees. I lowered my head and desperately prayed to the One. Who may forgive my behavior and the shame I have done. I should be walkin' with Jesus for the rest of my life. And turn away from evil and put a stop to my strife. I should hope to atone for the wrongs I've parlayed. And become a much better person until the end of my days. I cleaned myself up the best that I could. And headed south on I-40 to my place in the woods. I threw out my whiskey in an attempt to go straight. Knowing the following days would determine my fate. The tremors were awful and the sweat ran on down. From a face that was healing to turn things around. But the time slowly moved on until the hurtin' ran dry. As I prayed everyday with tears of joy in my eyes. After a couple of weeks my true spirit returned. Which I thought I had lost to the sad life I had earned. I went home to dear Mother to show the progress I'd made. And we both were so thankful for the path my Savior has laid. Now I'm walkin' with Jesus for the rest of my life. I've turned away from evil and put a stop to my strife. As I plan to atone for the wrongs I've parlayed. And be a much better person to the end of my days. The End *For those who might be interested. I will be posting my cartoon 'Bob's your Uncle' on my homepage. A new one will appear every second day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 7/19/2019 12:31:00 PM
An encouraging poem. I also enjoyed your comic strip. You have talent in both your writing and art form. You might like my poem Broken People.
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Date: 6/3/2019 4:39:00 PM
Nice story of redemption, David. Always uplifting to see a happy ending, esp. in these troubled times. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 6/2/2019 10:49:00 AM
A commitment to strengthening your willpower and faith - and you won, well done David!. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/31/2019 1:38:00 AM
G'day David … enjoy your cartoons. I've seen what addiction does, and how hard it is to cross the line which can be very, very wide indeed, but if the goal is reached life becomes so much better. A verse committed to easing strife - thank you David - Lindsay
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Date: 5/29/2019 4:08:00 AM
Pleases with your entire story in verse form. Exceedingly well done, Panagiota
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Date: 5/28/2019 4:29:00 PM
This is excellently written; content, rhyme and flow. The message is outstanding and relatable. You and your pen sure 'done good' with this write, it is rememberable ink filled with emotion. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 5/27/2019 11:11:00 PM
Love the message, the testimony and the clever and heart warming (and humorous) delivery of your poem, David! Walking close to Jesus..He will never let you down! God bless! :)
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Date: 5/27/2019 2:55:00 PM
You have a great sense of humour...and I can see you are a talented cartoonist..
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