I Will Wait For You

When you vowed your love, like a fairy, forever,
And fluttered about, like, possessed by new heaven,
I rolled my loneliness like a quilt in cover.
And got fermented by you like flour by leaven...

Your smile was as though the constellation twinkling,
For your love, I thought, I will take many a birth,
Your gestures went beyond all poetic jingling;
To make you immortal I'd kill the very death...

Why darling, soon, your bejeweled image got changed?
Where had your smile-beams found their hidden hiding place?
Your milky mind like an ocean of poison churned!
Slowly, forever, gloom shadowed your lovely face!

Does the sea, yet, stop the wavered wave coming home?
I'll wait for you, though you love, like a swift, long roam.


10 August 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 8/25/2021 5:25:00 PM
Lovely writing. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/9/2021 10:10:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/22/2021 11:44:00 PM
Beautiful hun the true love of waiting for the one is very personal within someone willing to wait no matter what. Keep it up ??
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Nancy Rdz Ll
Date: 8/22/2021 11:45:00 PM
Sorry the question marks I didn't notice them lol
Date: 8/19/2021 11:55:00 AM
So much heart and talent.
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Date: 8/16/2021 1:10:00 PM
Ahh!! Romantic lines you have penned. Sara
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Date: 8/16/2021 2:39:00 AM
What a lovely Sonnet Chris... so emotional write... Hearty congrats on your well deserved POTD... Keep inspiring... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/12/2021 3:50:00 AM
Sending so many congratulations to you dear Christuraj for your well deserved POTD, which I enjoyed very much - well done my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/12/2021 4:35:00 AM
Thank you very much. God Bless You!
Date: 8/12/2021 3:14:00 AM
Congratulations my friend. For such a POTD. And that you have the talent, courage strength to present such truth in your fine poetry. A most deserved award given.. God bless.
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Date: 8/11/2021 5:02:00 PM
"Your bejeweled image got changed" Sometimes this happens. So sad when it does. This is filled with so many emotions. It is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Christuraj, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/12/2021 4:36:00 AM
Thank you very much. God Bless You!
Date: 8/11/2021 3:23:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Friend. Revisiting to congratulate you for POTD. Brilliant! BW ~ Mala
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 11:47:00 PM
Thank you very much. God Bless!
Date: 8/11/2021 2:01:00 PM
Christuraj, beautiful and congratulations on POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 11:47:00 PM
Thank you very much. You are, indeed, a master craftsperson.
Date: 8/11/2021 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 1:16:00 PM
Thank you very much. God Bless You!
Date: 8/11/2021 11:47:00 AM
Back again to say CONGRATULATIONS on POTD. Well-deserved!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 1:16:00 PM
Thank you very much. God Bless You!
Date: 8/11/2021 10:37:00 AM
Absolutely amazing, an awesome gem of a poem Alex - congratulations re: the honour bestowed on you of POTD. Hugs/blessings, Jennifer.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 11:00:00 AM
Thank you very much. God Bless You!
Date: 8/11/2021 10:30:00 AM
How romantic and sad at the same time. Congrats Christuraj!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 10:59:00 AM
Thank you very much. God Bless You!
Date: 8/11/2021 9:44:00 AM
Such a sad poem, Alex, congratulations on POTD.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 10:59:00 AM
Thank you very much. God Bless You!
Date: 8/11/2021 9:12:00 AM
Congratulations on poem of the day win. A beautiful "I Will Wait For You" Sonnet. Have a great/blessed day writing away...........
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 9:34:00 AM
Thank you very much. God Bless You!
Date: 8/11/2021 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations on poem of the day Christuraj. A lovely sonnet it truly is, only you know if the one you love is worth waiting for… Belle
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 9:34:00 AM
Thank you very much. God Bless You!
Date: 8/11/2021 8:12:00 AM
Beautiful! Congrats on POTD, Alex
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 9:33:00 AM
Thank you very much, especially for the opportunities you have been giving to me.
Date: 8/11/2021 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations, Christuraj! A remarkable sonnet - really enjoyed! BW ~ Mala
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 9:33:00 AM
Thank you very much. I have learnt much from you.
Date: 8/11/2021 6:57:00 AM
A strong poem on love's commitment. Sad, however, when there's a dramatic alteration. Fine writing. Best wishes, Brian
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 9:31:00 AM
Thank you very much. God Bless You!
Date: 8/11/2021 6:52:00 AM
'Smile beams' and 'wavered waves' -- worth the wait!! Congrats on POTD, Alex! Blessings, Gershon
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 9:31:00 AM
Thank you very much. God Bless You!
Date: 8/11/2021 6:02:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Alex - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 6:11:00 AM
Thank you very much. God Bless You!
Date: 8/11/2021 5:53:00 AM
An eloquent write of longing! BIG congrats on poem of the day, Christuraj.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 6:11:00 AM
Thank you very much. God Bless You!
Date: 8/11/2021 4:53:00 AM
So glad this gem got Potd. Congratulations! Enjoy the honour. Congratulations on your win in Brain's contest too!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 6:10:00 AM
I think, my reply to you is missing. Hence, I am writing again. Thank you very much for your love and support.
Date: 8/11/2021 3:59:00 AM
Tania , I love your nautical haiku! congratulations on POTD!!!
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