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I Will Remember

I heard that he had been killed in Afghanistan oh, I will remember the day I heard it was a bright summer day azure blue and my heart swelled like an ocean of tears and I wept on a beautiful day clear as sparkling wine and my sorrow was a chain of lead as I visited his grave and was lost in a sea of white military headstones in rows and rows and rows baking under the fierce summer sun and hidden birds sang from drooping branches and flowers hung their heads yet butterflies drifted and squirrels scampered and clouds sailed across the blue but the air was saturated with quiet sadness and my heart was a blanket of darkness oh, some people assume that peacekeepers do not die but they are wrong for the graves do not lie and the drums of time will roll and roll and roll and I will keep him in my heart evermore where the sweetness of a childhood friend lives like an endless day of play... ________________ July 10, 2021 Poetry/Free Verse/I will remember Copyright Protected, ID 07-1370-163-10 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, A Brian Strand July 12 sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 07/11/2021 First Place

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Date: 7/11/2021 10:00:00 PM
Well said.Very tragic . Poignant ....Liked the poem
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Constance La France
Date: 7/12/2021 3:46:00 AM
Bhawana, thank you for the visit and compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 7/10/2021 10:09:00 AM
Lovely images embracing a sad, poignant day. Such a fine poem, Constance, which I enjoyed reading. Many of us keep someone in our heart who gave all.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/11/2021 5:51:00 AM
Milt, thanks for commenting on my poem and for the compliment, yes, we all know someone like this who touched our life's ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 7/10/2021 7:55:00 AM
This is heartbreaking on so many levels Constance and we should always remember the fallen especially the peacekeepers and medics who die so tragically:-( hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 7/10/2021 8:02:00 AM
Jan, thanks for your visit and comment, yes, so many senseless deaths in wars that do not belong to us ~ love and serenity _Constance

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