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I Will Not Open My Eyes

I wake up and stare at the clock; my heartbeat is ridiculous. Am I having a heart attack or is there really someone here? Noting the time, I cringe. Midnight on All Hallows Eve. Anything can happen, and I am helpless to stop it. The air is ominous, shadows creep closer and peer at me. I flip my eyes tightly shut, hoping to be left alone this time. There is no escape, my hair is touched and my forehead. I refuse to look; my heartbeat is a rapid drumbeat now. They are back, my internal voice observes; I try to shush her. She will not be quieted. A finger teases up my spine; scaring me. I will not open my eyes; I cannot open my eyes. Terrified, I open my eyes and note the clock watching me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 10/26/2021 5:15:00 PM
Another creepy tale...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/26/2021 11:22:00 PM
Halloween week - please forgive me! Snicker Snicker. Bite. Bite.
Date: 10/26/2021 12:44:00 PM
Hello Caren, ,Wow! The clock is watching you?! spooky. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/27/2021 11:04:00 AM
Hello Caren,oh-It often does. Hugs.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/26/2021 11:23:00 PM
It often does, and it ticks while it does it.
Date: 10/26/2021 9:58:00 AM
Ooooo, eerie!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/26/2021 11:23:00 PM
And true so many nights....

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