Heidi Sands Poet Personification

I Will Move You

Wind Personification #2

I will move you
As your hair flows
As your soul stirs
As you feel me touch your face,
You hear the leaves rustle
And the windmill turn
You hear the water lapping
Softly, on the shore
You see things floating by
In the air around you
As the sail shifts, 
I will slowly move you
-   I am the wind   -
And…just when I have
Become too much
I will die down, stop and recede
Into calm silence
Until, I return again

Heidi Sands

5/25/18

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Elaine George May 25, 2018 at 11:46 PM Lovely personification, Heidi. Thank you for sharing. I love the wind! Elaine Heidi Sands May 26, 2018 at 8:03 AM Thank you very much Elaine :)

Nette Onclaud May 25, 2018 at 5:12 PM breathtaking image, heidi.. finely done!...huggs Heidi Sands May 25, 2018 at 5:25 PM Thank you Nette :)

Anne-Lise Andresen May 25, 2018 at 3:09 PM - Fly easily like a feather ... lovely written :) - Happy weekend, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Heidi Sands May 25, 2018 at 3:23 PM Thank you Anne-Lise. Happy weekend to you too :)

Vijay Pandit May 25, 2018 at 2:09 PM I feel the wind moving me..great personification..lovely details like: You hear the leaves rustle And the windmill turn You hear the water lapping. Well written, Heidi. Heidi Sands May 25, 2018 at 3:09 PM Thank you Vijay. I kind of rushed that one. I may have been rushing with the wind today lol ! :)